Hey Gordon, I loved your poetry. It's my favorite style -- short lines, direct statements, simple words.I did find myself looking at the photos first, to get the full impact of the poem. You might want to watch?.
Switch ? And a very small comment , I stumbled on the word gas . Maybe wind or send, air, I dunno... Felt like a gas station... 😄 Just lovely tho..
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Hey Gordon, I loved your poetry. It's my favorite style -- short lines, direct statements, simple words.I did find myself looking at the photos first, to get the full impact of the poem. You might want to watch?.
Switch ? And a very small comment , I stumbled on the word gas . Maybe wind or send, air, I dunno... Felt like a gas station... 😄 Just lovely tho..